The Naughty Son
Tommy and his mother had holiday to the zoo. Tommy was a naughty boy, he never afraid with animals. One day he wanted to hold a horse. The horse didn’t feel happy and free from him.
Tommy was caught by zoo keepers. Surprised to hear that, his mother went to the information office. His mother was terrified about her son.
The guard came and met his mother and wanted to say. But when the guard wanted to speak, Tommy’s mother said,”Oh sir, please forgive my son, and let we get free”. The guard was laugh and said, “Thank you very much. Because your son had helped to cure the horse from hemorrhoids"
Text Analyzing
Orientation : Tommy and his mother were holiday in
the zoo.
Even 1 : Tommy is a naughty boy and he disturbed
the animal.
Even 2 : Zoo keepers caught Tommy.
Even 3 : Tommy’s mother apologized about her
son to the guard.
Twist : Tommy had cured the horse from
hemorrhoids
The Ugly Girl
There was a girl named Ika. Ika fell in love with Reno Reno Reno
She has brown face and messy hair. She wears a big glasses. She looks very ugly.
Ika always give smile to Reno Reno Reno
One day, Ika followed Reno Reno
“Why did you follow me until my house? Remember! You are an ugly girl, I’ll never get fall in love with you! Get out from my house!”said Reno Reno
Ika didn’t go home and still stayed in front of Reno Reno
Ika gave a very big smile to Reno
Text Analyzing
Orientation : there was a girl named Ika
Even 1 : Ika loves Reno , but Reno
Even 2 : Ika always give smile to Reno , but Reno
never reply it
Even 3 : Ika followed Reno
Even 4 : Reno
at Reno
Even 5 : Ika cleaned her face and chance to be a
beautiful girl
Even 6 : Reno
Twist : Ika showed her black tooth
Handphone for My Girl
A young man found some money in the trash. He was thinking what must he do with the money. Then, he decided to buy a handphone for his girlfriend. So that, his girlfriend can communicate with each other.
After he bought a new handphone with the simcard, he went to his girlfriend’s house. Arrived in there, he was giving it to his girlfriend. His girlfriend was very happy and grateful to him. His girlfriend saw the contents of the handphone.
"I finally have a phone, too. Thank you my honey “ said the girlfriend.
“You’re welcome" replied the young man with the flat.
“What’s the matter?"
"I feel happy and sad too. Because you have a handphone"
"So why?”
"I'm glad that you can communicate with each other.You can make a status updates on facebook and twitter, play games, and the others. But I feel sad because I don’t have a handphone".
Text Analyzing
Orientation :A young man found some money in the
trash.
Event 1 :He used that money to buy a new
handphone for his girlfriend.
Event 2 :He gave a new handphone to his girlfriend,
so that his girlfriend can communicate to
each other.
Twist : He bought a new handphone for his
girlfriend to communicate but he didn’t
have handphone.
Take a Walk to The Park
Dolly was playing in his house. His mother was angry to him because he made noise. His mother asked him to take his dog for a walk to the park. His mother said that he had to keep cleanliness. And asked to bring a big plastic bag and a little shovel for his dog’s feces.
“Put the feces in the plastic bag, and don’t be left out any feces in the park”
“Okay Mom” said Dolly.
When he was arrived in the park he looked many people that take their dog for a walk. Because that day had glorious weather. Suddenly, he looked his dog’s feces and he put it in the plastic bag.
In the twilight he go home and bring the full plastic bag to his mother and said, “Here is Mom all of dog’s feces in the park. I’m so tired after take the feces from another people’s dog. Huh, Mom is so funny that asked me to put all dog’s feces in the park”.
“Dolly!!!!” his mother was shocked.
Text Analyzing
Orientation :Dolly was playing in his house.
Event1 :His mother was angry because he made
noise.
Event 2 :His mother asked Dolly to take his dog
a walk in the park and asked to put the
dog’s feces in the pouch.
Event 3 :Dolly walked in the park and put some
dog’s feces.
Twist :Dolly went home and bring the full
pouch dog’s feces that there in the park.
